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Adele Administrator


Birthday: 1947-05-10 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: Carer/Reading, writing, craft, family history, people watching and classical music. Humour: Dry. Registration date: 2008-03-21
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:18 pm | |
| “I am” (A challenge set by Tiggee)
I am The B side of a record, yet another has been The person in a crowded room, but very rarely seen The page in a book that’s often left unread Left abandoned, for a more exciting page instead. I am the last person in a queue, the one that’s left behind I know you weren’t being, deliberately unkind I was just the last thing on your mind
I am The blown out candle, that makes others shine brighter The one that carries the load, so theirs is made lighter I am the footprint, which once walked across this land Where once we were together, walking hand in hand I am the last person in a queue, the one that’s left behind I know you weren’t being, deliberately unkind I was just the last thing on your mind
I am The feisty salmon, that fights her way upstream Fighting against the currant, lost in a bewildered dream But no more my friend, will I run away and hide I have finally decided, to fight against the tide And to all those out there, who couldn’t give a damn I think… So therefore I AM!
TRAVELLING LIGHT
With all his worldly possessions Filling two plastic carrier bags He had matted hair, worn out shoes And clothes that were now mere rags This worldly weather-beaten face Walks on through cold and heat Only stopping intermittingly To rest his aching feet He sets off again on his journey Where to is a complete mystery Going where destiny takes him Under earths cloudly. canopy Did something happen to him? That he could not possibly mend Was there no one to help? Not even a special friend? When his journey has ended And he lay's him down to sleep Will anybody miss him? Will anybody weep? Will he leave any traces? Will his spirit have left it's mark? Will he be burnt in someone's memory? Will there be the slightest spark? Will he join the spectral figures? That still walk the land Will he finally have found his place? Amongst the shadowy band Will they be welcoming? And let this stranger in Among all the other souls Till he finds his kith and kin He leaves nothing behind him As his soul fly's into the night Only two nondescript plastic bags Because he was travelling light.
Adele
[center]Dedicated to 'im indoors (Thanks for the inspiration Leo, ta chuck)
‘im indoors
Well I likes a bit o’ poetry It fair suits me down’t ‘t ground There’s uther folks that’s like me Of that I’ll be bound
Wi’ poetry I’m fair t’ middlin Other folks are better than me They can mak it rhyme ‘n wotnot Write pose ‘n verse that’s free
Plucked up courage ‘n joined a forum It were all St Maggies idea Sum poets cum from America An’ a bloomin load from over ‘ere
Other poets cum from Ireland Wi’ Celtic ‘eratage shining through Their words flowin like a stream T’ entertain me an’ you
Now I gots to admit I’m addicted Spendin an ‘our, or two, or three Readin’ other folks poems Like I ses, their better than me
But then I got t’ thinking Am I neglectin ‘im indoors Spendin loads o’ time on’t computer Then avin t’ catch oop wi’ me chores
Right… I’m makin’ time for me an’ ‘im I’m battenin’ down th’ ‘atch But “Eh lass go on computer” ‘e ses Cos I’m watchin’ football match!!!
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Ladybug Gold Membership


Birthday: 1946-12-05 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: work with children, poetry, music Registration date: 2008-07-06
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:12 pm | |
| Adele, Loved them all , great writes. Louisa  |
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Bobart Gold Membership


Registration date: 2008-02-20
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:35 pm | |
| Absolutely loved all three Adele..very witty. bobart :laugh1: |
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Adele Administrator


Birthday: 1947-05-10 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: Carer/Reading, writing, craft, family history, people watching and classical music. Humour: Dry. Registration date: 2008-03-21
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:46 pm | |
| | Louisaa_Lou wrote: | Adele,
Loved them all , great writes.
Louisa  |
Hi Louisa, Thank you so much for your kind words. Much appreciated. Adele. |
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Adele Administrator


Birthday: 1947-05-10 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: Carer/Reading, writing, craft, family history, people watching and classical music. Humour: Dry. Registration date: 2008-03-21
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:49 pm | |
| | Bobart wrote: | Absolutely loved all three Adele..very witty.
bobart :laugh1: |
Hi Bobart, I was quite surprised to see my poems on the forum. Many thanks for dropping by. Adele. |
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 | Subject: Poetry by Adele Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:52 pm | |
| Lovely stuff Adele and bugger him indoors Unless o'course 'es lucky an' comes up wi' those eight draws. Love Geoff :laugh1: |
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Adele Administrator


Birthday: 1947-05-10 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: Carer/Reading, writing, craft, family history, people watching and classical music. Humour: Dry. Registration date: 2008-03-21
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:12 am | |
| Well thank ya kind sir but, I must say, I got a goodun and, 'e's got my permission t' say so. :rofl:
Adele. |
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cath Administrator/Forum Manager


Birthday: 1945-03-31 Age: 67 Job/Hobbies: animals Registration date: 2008-03-21
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Wed Aug 06, 2008 5:54 am | |
| Excellent Adele - very enjoyable.
Cath |
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orcadia Gold Membership


Job/Hobbies: administrator for local charity, choir, poetry and charity shops Humour: Yes Registration date: 2008-06-28
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:27 am | |
| Oh Adele what a delightful assortment here! 'im indoors made me laugh so much! I enjoyed all three, number two was thought provoking..and it is somehting I think about sometimes..what will my legacy be? Orcadia |
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Adele Administrator


Birthday: 1947-05-10 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: Carer/Reading, writing, craft, family history, people watching and classical music. Humour: Dry. Registration date: 2008-03-21
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:41 am | |
| | Shandy wrote: | | Excellent poems Adele, all made good reading, well done. |
Hi Shandy, Thank you so much for your complimentary words, much appreciated. Adele. |
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Adele Administrator


Birthday: 1947-05-10 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: Carer/Reading, writing, craft, family history, people watching and classical music. Humour: Dry. Registration date: 2008-03-21
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:43 am | |
| | cath wrote: | Excellent Adele - very enjoyable.
Cath |
Hi Cath, Thanks for popping by, glad you liked them. Adele. |
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Adele Administrator


Birthday: 1947-05-10 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: Carer/Reading, writing, craft, family history, people watching and classical music. Humour: Dry. Registration date: 2008-03-21
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korculablue Gold Membership


Birthday: 1936-06-04 Age: 75 Job/Hobbies: Retired school teacher/ hobbies are....reading, writing in general, with poetry and music Humour: Most kinds Registration date: 2008-06-19
 | Subject: Poetry by Adele Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:24 pm | |
| Hi Adele :sunny: What lovely poetry  I enjoyed reading them so much, each one a different style and topic. They're wonderful !!!! How could I choose one above the others I'm sure you passed Tiggee's challenge with flying colours. Leila  |
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Adele Administrator


Birthday: 1947-05-10 Age: 65 Job/Hobbies: Carer/Reading, writing, craft, family history, people watching and classical music. Humour: Dry. Registration date: 2008-03-21
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:20 pm | |
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FOUNDER Administrator

Job/Hobbies: Retired Registration date: 2008-02-20
 | Subject: Re: POETRY BY ADELE Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:46 am | |
| Hi Adele
Excellent choice of poems for the portal page. I always enjoy reading your poetry but rarely get a chance to comment much thee days.
Thank you for sharing this selection with us.
Maggie |
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