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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Adele on Mon Jul 28, 2008 5:18 pm

“I am”
(A challenge set by Tiggee)

I am
The B side of a record, yet another has been
The person in a crowded room, but very rarely seen
The page in a book that’s often left unread
Left abandoned, for a more exciting page instead.
I am the last person in a queue, the one that’s left behind
I know you weren’t being, deliberately unkind
I was just the last thing on your mind

I am
The blown out candle, that makes others shine brighter
The one that carries the load, so theirs is made lighter
I am the footprint, which once walked across this land
Where once we were together, walking hand in hand
I am the last person in a queue, the one that’s left behind
I know you weren’t being, deliberately unkind
I was just the last thing on your mind

I am
The feisty salmon, that fights her way upstream
Fighting against the currant, lost in a bewildered dream
But no more my friend, will I run away and hide
I have finally decided, to fight against the tide
And to all those out there, who couldn’t give a damn
I think…
So therefore I AM!


TRAVELLING LIGHT

With all his worldly possessions
Filling two plastic carrier bags
He had matted hair, worn out
shoes
And clothes that were now mere
rags

This worldly weather-beaten face
Walks on through cold and heat
Only stopping intermittingly
To rest his aching feet

He sets off again on his journey
Where to is a complete mystery
Going where destiny takes him
Under earths cloudly. canopy

Did something happen to him?
That he could not possibly mend
Was there no one to help?
Not even a special friend?

When his journey has ended
And he lay's him down to sleep
Will anybody miss him?
Will anybody weep?

Will he leave any traces?
Will his spirit have left it's mark?
Will he be burnt in someone's
memory?
Will there be the slightest spark?

Will he join the spectral figures?
That still walk the land
Will he finally have found his
place?
Amongst the shadowy band

Will they be welcoming?
And let this stranger in
Among all the other souls
Till he finds his kith and kin

He leaves nothing behind him
As his soul fly's into the night
Only two nondescript plastic
bags
Because he was travelling light.

Adele


[center]Dedicated to 'im indoors
(Thanks for the inspiration Leo, ta chuck)

‘im indoors

Well I likes a bit o’ poetry
It fair suits me down’t ‘t ground
There’s uther folks that’s like me
Of that I’ll be bound

Wi’ poetry I’m fair t’ middlin
Other folks are better than me
They can mak it rhyme ‘n wotnot
Write pose ‘n verse that’s free

Plucked up courage ‘n joined a forum
It were all St Maggies idea
Sum poets cum from America
An’ a bloomin load from over ‘ere

Other poets cum from Ireland
Wi’ Celtic ‘eratage shining through
Their words flowin like a stream
T’ entertain me an’ you

Now I gots to admit I’m addicted
Spendin an ‘our, or two, or three
Readin’ other folks poems
Like I ses, their better than me

But then I got t’ thinking
Am I neglectin ‘im indoors
Spendin loads o’ time on’t computer
Then avin t’ catch oop wi’ me chores

Right… I’m makin’ time for me an’ ‘im
I’m battenin’ down th’ ‘atch
But “Eh lass go on computer” ‘e ses
Cos I’m watchin’ football match!!!


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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Ladybug on Fri Aug 01, 2008 11:12 am

Adele,

Loved them all , great writes.

Louisa :hug3

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Bobart on Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:35 pm

Absolutely loved all three Adele..very witty.

bobart :laugh1

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Adele on Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:46 pm

Louisaa_Lou wrote:Adele,

Loved them all , great writes.

Louisa :hug3


Hi Louisa,

Thank you so much for your kind words. Much appreciated.

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Post by Adele on Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:49 pm

Bobart wrote:Absolutely loved all three Adele..very witty.

bobart :laugh1


Hi Bobart,

I was quite surprised to see my poems on the forum. Many thanks for dropping by.

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Poetry by Adele

Post by Geoff LeVoguer on Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:52 pm

Lovely stuff Adele and bugger him indoors
Unless o'course 'es lucky an' comes up wi' those eight draws.
Love Geoff :laugh1

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Adele on Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:12 pm

Well thank ya kind sir but, I must say, I got a goodun and, 'e's got my permission t' say so. :rofl

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by cath on Wed Aug 06, 2008 4:54 am

Excellent Adele - very enjoyable.

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by orcadia on Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:27 am

Oh Adele
what a delightful assortment here! 'im indoors made me laugh so much!
I enjoyed all three, number two was thought provoking..and it is somehting I think about sometimes..what will my legacy be?

Very Happy :hug3
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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Adele on Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:41 am

Shandy wrote:Excellent poems Adele, all made good reading, well done.


Hi Shandy,

Thank you so much for your complimentary words, much appreciated.

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Adele on Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:43 am

cath wrote:Excellent Adele - very enjoyable.

Cath


Hi Cath,

Thanks for popping by, glad you liked them.

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Adele on Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:58 am

orcadia wrote:Oh Adele
what a delightful assortment here! 'im indoors made me laugh so much!
I enjoyed all three, number two was thought provoking..and it is somehting I think about sometimes..what will my legacy be?

Very Happy :hug3
Orcadia


Thank you my friend for the encouragment. Glad 'im indoors' made you laugh. As for 'Travelling light' where will any one of us be in the future? Enjoy today, it's the only time that matters. Whoops... I've just fell off my soap box.

:hug3 Adele.



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Post by korculablue on Wed Aug 06, 2008 5:24 pm

Hi Adele sunny What lovely poetry :love I enjoyed reading them so much, each one a different style and topic. They're wonderful !!!! How could I choose one above the others scratch

I'm sure you passed Tiggee's challenge with flying colours. Very Happy :star3

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Adele on Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:20 pm

korculablue wrote:Hi Adele sunny What lovely poetry :love I enjoyed reading them so much, each one a different style and topic. They're wonderful !!!! How could I choose one above the others scratch

I'm sure you passed Tiggee's challenge with flying colours. Very Happy :star3

Leila :hug3 :friend1


Hi Leila,

Thank you for your lovely words, I'm truly grateful.

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Re: POETRY BY ADELE

Post by Maggie on Thu Aug 07, 2008 9:46 am

Hi Adele

Excellent choice of poems for the portal page. I always enjoy reading your poetry but rarely get a chance to comment much thee days.

Thank you for sharing this selection with us.

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