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PostOh me head


Well I woke with this headache as painful as could be
Could not eat my breakfast of have a cup of tea
Thought I would run to the bathroom and throw up and be sick
But I just thought if I lie thier that would do the trick

But through out this frozen Sunday my head kept banging too
Then later on in the day running to the loo
So thought now in the afternoon write a poem to ease my mind
The releasing of my inner thoughts eased the headache I did find

But still I keep on thinking will it return with this aweful pain
All that aweful banging driving my mind now quite insane
Perhaps if I lay down early and ease the pressure within my head
Maybe it would be the best thing if I took myself to bed


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By freedom the freedom of the heart must be told in truth love and hugs


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Re: Oh me head
Post on Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:43 pm by cath
Oh dear Freedom - sorry to hear you have had a bad head. I hope it's better by now.

Cath
Re: Oh me head
Post on Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:49 pm by freedom
Thanks Cath its easing up a bit now hopefully it will be gone by the morning hope you had a great sunday love and hugs freedom xxxx
Re: Oh me head
Post on Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:51 pm by cath
Good to hear that it is a little better Freedom. Sleep well.
Re: Oh me head
Post on Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:53 pm by freedom
Thank you Cath probably go up about nine otherwise I wont sleep love always freedom xxx
Re: Oh me head
Post on Sun Jan 31, 2010 7:41 pm by Stormbringer
I hope you feel better soon

Love Richard x
Re: Oh me head
Post on Sun Jan 31, 2010 8:00 pm by freedom
Thank you Richard for your kind message love and hugs your friend always freedom xxx
Re: Oh me head
Post on Sun Jan 31, 2010 11:30 pm by Adele
Hi Free,

I hope that by the time you read this you will be feeling tons better.

Take care,

Adele. xx
Re: Oh me head
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:38 am by Suzie
Hi Freedom

Hope your head better today.
Suzie
Re: Oh me head
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:45 am by freedom
Hi adele alot better today off to the doctors in a minute will catch up with you later your friend always love freexxxx
Re: Oh me head
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:46 am by freedom
Hi suzi alot better my friend off to doctors in a moment snow on the ground so wearing my new pink wellies lol love always freedom xxxx
Freedom
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:57 pm by peanuts
Hey there Free, I do hope your head is not banging still. I hope your trip to the docs was not too eventful, and you and your pink wellies must look stunning!!!!

LOTS OF LOVE SUE
Re: Oh me head
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:45 pm by freedom
Thanks sue had a few looks lol they certainly can be seen. Doctors was very good and got some news that may help the problem. Now just the tunnel to sort out love always freedom xxx
OH MY HEAD BY FREEDOM REPLY FROM JULIE
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:48 pm by Julie
FREEDOM WHEN GETTING A BANGING HEAD,AND BEING SICK MY HEART GOS OUT TO YOU.MOST MORING I WAKE WITH A BAD HEAD BUT IT CAUSE BY MY DISC IN MY NECK,HOPE YOU GET BETTER SOON AS ITS NO FUN.JUST KEEP YOURSELF WARM AND DONT OVER DO THINGS LOTS OF LOVE FROM YOUR FRIENDS JULIE AND NORMAN AND WITH YOU FEELING UNDER THE WEATHER THIS ARE FOR YOU SENT WITH LOTS
Re: Oh me head
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:51 pm by freedom
Thank you Julie and Norman for your lovely message always warm my heart when reading your wonderful words love always and friends always freedom xxxxx
Re: Oh me head
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:06 pm by Hobin Rud
:cup1

There yer go Flo Very Happy

Thomas.
Re: Oh me head
Post on Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:29 pm by freedom
You zebs that was a lovely cup of tea hope to see ya tonight my friend love and hugs flo xxxxx
 

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