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Postchoises

Why do we have to choose its an aweful thing to do
Whether its a choice between a friend or too
Never really liked the word because I might get it wrong
Then I know forever I will never sing this song

Perhaps if this word was not invented then it would be alright
Or maybe if should or turn into a fight
But the word choices can mean many things some are nice as well
But I will not tell you mine I wont kiss and tell



Love and hugs freedom thinking about choice ha ha xxxxx

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By freedom the freedom of the heart must be told in truth love and hugs
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Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:50 pm by Adele
Once again you have given us
plenty of food for thought,
but please don't worry chuck
it wasn't all for nought
I know sometimes making choices
can drive one round the bend
but alls well that ended well
Cos you chose me as your friend

Adele. xx
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:07 pm by kenanstiss
Your poem has sparked a thought Freedom, as all good poetry should ,choices are a bit like paths you can go left or right or even straight on, the difficult bit is finding out which path to take? xxx
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 5:53 pm by Hobin Rud
Yo Flo! plenty of choices throughout life,

I like the red ones in quality street tin!

Mmmm! purple's not bad either! (just had one! )

well done Flo!

Thomas.
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 6:47 pm by cath
Excellent Flo - Choices what can I say we can all have a choice it's which one we take...

Hello Mr T - Just shows how posh you are having 'Quality Street'......

Cath
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:04 pm by Stormbringer
I always seem to make the wrong one,might get it right one day !!!!!!!!

Richard
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:16 pm by Hobin Rud
cath wrote:
Excellent Flo - Choices what can I say we can all have a choice it's which one we take...

Hello Mr T - Just shows how posh you are having 'Quality Street'......

Cath


Quite right too Cath!

Th mas.
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:16 pm by freedom
Hi adele yes choices are hard to choose mine get worse every day love and hugs freedom xxx
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:18 pm by freedom
Hi ken it can drive round the bend if you get it wrong and boy do I get it wrong sometimes love freedom xx
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:20 pm by freedom
Hi zebs take your pick theres one of every colour just for my zebs.. Help yourself love and hugs floxxxxxxx
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:24 pm by freedom
Never mind munchskins I get it wrong most of the time you seem to have only got it wrong once. Its in the religion try and keep faith. Your guardian angel is watching you not big brother and the eagle love and hugs freedom xxxx lol xxx
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:26 pm by freedom
Its quite confusing when you get all this advice sometimes it better not to have said anything at all lol more confused than ever love and hugs freedom. Hope the little puppy is ok xxxx
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:29 pm by Hobin Rud
freedom wrote:
Hi zebs take your pick theres one of every colour just for my zebs.. Help yourself love and hugs floxxxxxxx


Thanxs Flo...

will they be alright to take with...

Holsten pils?

Th mas.
Re: choises
Post on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:41 pm by freedom
The best I could do is that enough zebs hope so I am pot less love freedom xxx
 

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